"draped over the
fence"
How beautiful this
was to read ! all the blossoms!
My choices below are placed in no order of preference, just in
the numerical order they were posted .
Again, watch your adjectives, allow the reader to insert their
feelings into the poem
Here is one from me :
morning glories
draped over the fence
faded blue jeans
Karina Klesko
plum blossoms
falling on dad's grave...
unspoken words
# 37. Keith A. Simmonds
Moon blaze—
a barren apple tree
blossoming too
# 39. Vasile Moldovan, RO
the old man
realises his dreams
catching blossoms
# 49. Keith A. Simmonds, TT
mango blossoms
tumbling in the wind
each a memory
# 53. Keith A. Simmonds, TT
silvered shingles
of an abandoned farmhouse
lilac blossoms
# 70. Catherine J.S. Lee, US
spring burial
serviceberry blossoms
white against the clouds
# 74. Catherine J.S. Lee, US
lime blossoms on the
pane
the old man and his image...
a flood of tears
# 79. Keith A. Simmonds, TT
Twilight—
the lime branches
full of buds
# 80. Magdalena Dale, RO
Tree blossoms—
the turtledove's egg
eaten by a magpie
# 86. Magdalena Dale, RO
Blossoms fallen—
branches full of leaves
in sunlight
# 88. Magdalena Dale, RO
apple blossom
milky white skin
where the bra was
# 90. Rafal Zabratynski, PL
eggs sunny side up—
across the street a view of
poui blossoms
# 100. Gillena Cox, TT
sultry afternoon—
parasol ants toting
ixora blossoms
# 104. Gillena Cox, TT
a peach tree
in full blossom—
her first kiss
# 107. Keith A. Simmonds, TT
grandmother
repeating her prayers
counting plum blossoms
# 111. Keith A. Simmonds, TT
apple blossoms
ghostly in the moonlight
fluttering moths
# 112. Catherine J. S. Lee, US
quince blossoms
flicker in the breeze
hummingbirds
# 114. Catherine J. S. Lee, US
crescent moon
honeysuckle blossoms
near the old outhouse
# 118. Catherine J. S. Lee, US
solitary man
on a zen journey:
poui blossoms
# 121. Keith A. Simmonds, TT
blossom wine—
an elegant crystal glass
on the table
# 130. John Daleiden, US
