Contents

 

 

 


Sketchbook 

Sheila Windsor UK, Cindy Tebo, US, Karina Klesko, US
 

 

Tanka Triad

A Snake Skin In The Canoe

sheila windsor    sw
cindy tebo        ct
karina klesko      kk

sunrise through a gap
in the morning glory, cat's eyes         sw
 

17 pages missing
from dad's journal
we take turns filling in
the possibilities                               ct
 

bloody knife
black deep into night
starfrost swirls
his pane, where sunflowers
are ochre and he plucked them
from the gutter                               sw
 

up and down stairs of ambiguity
petals of a rose unfurling its scent      kk
 

mother wears her bra
on the outside of her blouse
with a big smile
she asks my name
as I look like the girl
in the picture on the wall                   kk
 

tropical pet shop
grand opening
the owner's snapshot
of a fake palm tree                           ct
 

last week's fishing report recycled
a snake skin in the canoe                  ct
 

the devil peeps over
batman's right shoulder
while a beautiful lady winks
bedroom curtains                             sw
 

those dark dreams
hanging from his chain
decades of skeleton keys
I put two shiny quarters
in the nickelodeon
"Heaven Can Wait"                            kk


 

 

 

 

The Form of the Tankatriad

The First Triad

There are nine verses in the poem divided into three triads. Each triad is structured uniquely:

A 2Line tanka; in the first triad any subject can be selected. This verse is the first verse in each triad.

A 4Line tanka; this is "the root verse" of the first triad; it is a light whimsical verse written on a theme from the 2 line verse of the first triad.

6Six Line tanka; the poet should compose up to 34 syllable tanka that develops the ideas /theme in the previous verse and brings the triad to a conclusion.  This tanka v

Each participant will write one verse in each triad; each verse of a participating poet will be constructed in one of the tanka forms described above—2 line tanka, 4 line tanka, and 6 line tanka. Each writer will construct only one of each of these tanka verses.

(each participant decides randomly on order of poets/each poet having three verses.)

 

The Second Triad

A 2Line tanka; this verse links back to the two line verse in the first triad but it shifts topics.

A 4Line tanka; "this root verse" is a light whimsical verse. The writer should choose a new theme based on the two line verse of the first triad.

6Six Line tanka; usual range 34-44 syllables but ultimately the counts are left up to the authors.
 

 

The Third Triad

This tanka develops the new topic and brings it to a conclusion.

2. Line Verse links back to previous two line verse and introduces a new topic

4. Line Verse- "the root verse" determines the theme

6. Line Verse develops theme and concludes it . This last Tankatriad should loop back to the beginning of the series.

Each section of the Tankatriad does not "have to be written in order of 2-4-6 it can be switched mirrored etc. but the two line verse needs to link to the previous two line verse. As with all rules, these are only guidelines.

Karina Klesko, Sheila Windsor, and Cindy Tebo

 

 

 

Links to Rengay in this issue:

Defining the Horizon, Tiny Silhouettes

Links to Triolet in this issue:

Triolet - Rengay: The Form: West Meets East

Links to Tanka Triad in this issue: A Snake Skin In The Canoe

Links to Haiga in this issue

Links to The Little Black Book in this issue

 

 


to top of page

 

 

 

 

hit counter html code