
Results of the
September / October 2010 "autumn wind" Kukai
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Announcing September / October 2010
"autumn wind" Kukai
The September / October
2010
Kukai theme is
"autumn wind". SeeThe
Haiku Handbook, William J. Higginson, p. 277. Use the exact words
"autumn wind" in the haiku. No more
than a total of three haiku may be submitted. Haiku
submitted to the kukai should not be work shopped, appear
on-line in forums, or in print.
Haiku
Author,
Country
To:
kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org
Subject:
"autumn wind" kukai
Submissions:
Wednesday, September 01, 2010 – Thursday, October 21, 2010 Midnight.
Voting: Friday,
October 22, 2010 - Saturday, October 29, 2010,
Midnight.
The results will
be published in the Sunday, October 31, 2010
Sketchbook 5-5 Results of the
September / October 2010
"autumn wind"
Kukai.
Letters to the
Sketchbook editors and discussions on
various forums indicate that some assumptions about a
kukai must be spelled out. From now on (April 1, 2008),
Haiku entered in the Sketchbook
kukai must be previously unpublished; they must
not be workshopped; they must not appear on any list,
forum, group, blog, or in print. In short, if the haiku
has appeared on the internet or in print we consider it
to have been published. The voting in a kukai is
anonymous and publication anywhere voids anonyminity.
Any haiku found to be previously published will be
disqualified.
A kukai is a peered
review poetry contest. A haiku Topic is assigned by the
editor. An 'anonymized' list of submitted haiku is then
distributed to all participating poets and they are
invited to vote. Votes are returned to the editor who
tallies the votes and publishes the haiku for the
participants, this time with names and points revealed.
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These twenty-seven poems
from ten countries contributed 70 haiku to the "autumn wind" Kukai:
Ralf Bröker, DE; Bouwe
Brouwer, NL; Cezar-FlorianCiobîca, FR; Magdalena Dale, RO;John
Daleiden, US; Andrzej Dembończyk, PL; Claire Everett, UK;Ignatius
Fay, CA; Bernard Gieske, US; George Hawkins, US; George Holman, Cara
US; Marleen Hulst, NL; Alegria Imperial, CA;
Ramona Linke, DE; Jacek Margolak, PL; Thomas Martin, US; Diane Mayr,
US; John McDonald, UK; Vasile Moldovan, RO; Aju Mukhopadhyay, IN;
Reason A. Poteet, US; Alex Serban, RO; Keith A. Simmonds, TT; Brian
Strand, UK; Sunil Uniyal, IN; Althea Rowe Watson, US; Neal Whitman,
US.
Canada, France, Germany, India, Netherlands, Poland, Romania,
Trinidad and Tobago, United Kingdom (England), United States
1st Place
laundry day
an autumn wind wears
his shirt
# 20. Bouwe Brouwer, NL
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2nd Place
autumn
no hair to catch
the wind
# 02. George Hawkins, US
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3rd Place
autumn wind
a father looks for
his kite
# 12. Ralf Bröker, DE
autumn wind—
leaves covering
our shadows
# 66. Cezar-Florian Ciobîcă, FR
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4th Place
autumn wind
losing the argument
with my boss
# 40. Marleen Hulst, NL
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5th Place
a lost butterfly
fights against the current—
autumn wind
# 03. Alex Serban, RO
autumn wind
the subtle taste of ashes
in our food
# 26. George Hawkins, US
searching his
coat
she finds the smell
of autumn wind
# 35. Ralf Bröker, DE
the vulture
circling it's shadow
autumn wind
# 69. Althea Rowe Watson, US
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6th Place
two old lovers
walking in tight embrace...
autumn wind
# 09. Keith A. Simmonds, TT
my neighbors and I
swap gossip and leaves—
autumn wind
# 18. Cara Holman, US
this autumn wind
unfolds my memory book…
leaf after leaf
# 25. Magdalena Dale, RO
autumn wind
she sends some leaves by post
# 29. Thomas Martin, US
wet window
the autumn colors come
with the wind
# 43. Jacek Margolak, PL
through the darkness
the whisper of her yes—
autumn wind
# 46. John Daleiden, US
autumn wind
rearranging the leaves
in the zen garden
# 62. Bouwe Brouwer, NL
autumn wind
as each sand hill crane
steps out of a pose
# 70. Althea Rowe Watson, US
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7th Place
coming soon
autumn wind
circus of leaves
# 05. Bernard Gieske, US
autumn wind—
the chapel door
closes early
# 07. Alegria Imperial, CA
hanging rain drops
in the old oak grove
autumn wind
# 11. Neal Whitman, US
eaf by leaf
my carefully chosen words
autumn wind
# 15. Claire Everett, UK
autumn wind
the tire swing
a pendulum
# 42. Bouwe Brouwer, NL
a buck leaping
over the fallen tree—
autumn wind
# 55. Neal Whitman, US
brushing her cheek
before he leaves
autumn wind
# 59. Claire Everett, UK
autumn wind—
dressing the scarecrow
with my father's top coat
# 67. Cezar-Florian Ciobîcă, FR
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8th Place
autumn wind—
a whistling boy
through the fallen leaves
# 10. John McDonald, UK (Scotland)
yellow leaves
up and down up and down—
autumn wind
# 22. Andrzej Dembończyk, PL
autumn wind—
small spiders
fly away
# 44. Andrzej Dembończyk, PL
Between forests
the wind sweeps away
the last leaf
# 45. Vasile Moldovan, RO
autumn wind
the whipoorwill
calls the evening
# 50. Thomas Martin, US
dance arbour
nothing but autumn wind
# 56. Ralf Bröker, DE
autumn winds—
the meadow grass turns green
in mountain valleys
# 65. John Daleiden, US
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9th Place
autumn wind...
the clatter of cornstalks
tied to a lamppost
# 04. Diane Mayr, US
after the concert
... strong autumn wind
beats the high tide
# 14. Ramona Linke, DE
autumn wind
styles my hair
for free
# 16. Reason A. Poteet, US
autumn wind—
dry leaves on the sidewalk
chase each other
# 19. Sunil Uniyal, India
autumn wind
dropped letter
dodging his reach
# 28. Bernard Gieske, US
paper moon—
too high
for the autumn wind
# 30. Alegria Imperial, CA
autumn wind––
weaving my way home
under patchy skies
# 34. Neal Whitman, US
autumn wind—
the robin's red breast
warming
# 54. John McDonald, UK (Scotland)
Autumn is coming
Only the wind plays
in the bandshell
# 58. Ramona Linke, DE
autumn wind
the clothes on the line
still damp
# 60. Marleen Hulst, NL
morning chill—
hickory smoke carried
on the autumn wind
# 61. Cara Holman, US
All alone in the night...
listening to the sound
of autumn wind
# 64. Vasile Moldovan, RO
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10th Place
upon the Autumn wind
summer's warm caress departs—
where are my salopettes
# 01. Brian Strand, UK
autumn wind
traces of the black circle
where she burned the leaves
# 06.
cool autumn wind
smearing the rapeseed
bank called our loan
# 08. Ignatius Fay, CA
autumn wind flows
keeping its yearly promise—
once again
# 13. Aju Mukhopadhyay, IN
autumn wind
taking the day off
to go to the beach
# 17. Marleen Hulst, NL
autumn morning
the creak and rattle
from an old windmill
# 21. Jacek Margolak, PL
Chestnut leaves
falling one by one—
autumn wind
# 23. Vasile Moldovan, RO
autumn wind
over the mountain—
hail breaks my windshield
# 24. John Daleiden, US
trout helped
in mountain river—
autumn wind
# 27. Alex Serban, RO
autumn wind
the dying embers
cast faint ghosts
# 31. Ignatius Fay, CA
autumn wind...
leaves falling into
an assembly of leaves
# 32. Keith A. Simmonds, TT
autumn wind
toppling the summer
—house
# 33. John McDonald, UK (Scotland)
autumn wind calls
reminding that she was here—
last year
# 36. Aju Mukhopadhyay, IN
Autumn wind—
sunny flickering falls
out of the birch
# 37. Ramona Linke, DE
no one hears the stars
nailing down the tin roof sky
autumn wind
# 38.
the voice of death
sings its dirge
autumn wind
# 39. Reason A. Poteet, US
autumn wind—
a maple leaf
falling up
# 41. Cara Holman, US
so many sighs
lost in the autumn wind…
heart’s music
# 47. Magdalena Dale, RO
mowing
beneath the chimes—
autumn wind
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autumn wind
turning the scenic pages
of October
# 49. Bernard Gieske, US
flaming trees
but not fanned
by the autumn wind
# 51. Alegria Imperial, CA
autumn wind…
urgent need to pee
knot in my shoelace
# 52. Ignatius Fay, CA
the full moon
basking in crimson glow—
autumn wind
# 53. Keith A. Simmonds, TT
autumn wind
breathes a sigh
as it passes away
# 57. Aju Mukhopadhyay, IN
autumn moon
through tall windblown reeds
a white sail
# 63. Jacek Margolak, PL
with the strength
of thirty-three miners
autumn wind
# 68.
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Hello Haiku Poet,
Below is the ballot for the Sketchbook July / August “coolness
/ heat” Kukai vote.
Please NOTE that the votes should be sent to:
kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org
CALL FOR Sketchbook
July / August “coolness / heat” Kukai
vote:
Voting: Sunday, August 22 - Saturday, August 28, 2010, Midnight.
1. All the entries are listed on the ballot by number.
2. Only submitting Kukai Poets are eligible to vote.
3. Email your votes to: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org When
voting, please use the words
coolness / heat” Kukai
vote in the subject
line of your e-mail.
4. Each poet has SIX (6) points to use for the kukai vote.
Voters may distribute the points in increments of 1, 2, or 3.
You may not cast more than 3 points for any single poem.
5. Please do not vote for your own poem(s). Any such votes will
be disqualified.
6. Please use the following format to submit your votes (listing
by numerical order, rather than order of preference, as the
sample below):
To: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org
Subject:
“coolness / heat” Kukai
voteEach voter has 6 points:
# 03 = 1 pt.
# 11 = 2 pts.
# 28 = 3 pts.
7. All votes will be compiled and the haiku will then be
published in the Tuesday, August 31, 2010 Sketchbook
with votes received; on the names of the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd, etc.
place poets' names will be revealed.
Please indicate with your ballot
one of these choices:
Yes,
reveal my name even if my haiku receive 0 votes
No, remove my name if my haiku receive 0 votes
Poets who do not include one of
the above statements will have their name published with each
haiku.
The voting results will appear as per the following sample:
0 2 7 11 = ____ Place
Which means: No voter gave 3 points, 2 voters gave 2 points, 7
voters gave 1 point = for a total of 11 points.
CALL FOR Sketchbook
July / August “coolness / heat” Kukai
vote:
Voting: Sunday, August 22 - Saturday, August 28, 2010, Midnight.
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