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Results of the September / October 2010 "autumn wind" Kukai
 

 

 


 

Announcing  September / October  2010 "autumn wind" Kukai

The September / October 2010  Kukai theme is "autumn wind".  SeeThe Haiku Handbook, William J. Higginson, p. 277. Use the exact words "autumn wind"  in the haiku. No more than a total of three haiku may be submitted. Haiku submitted to the kukai should not be work shopped, appear on-line in forums, or in print.

Haiku

Author, Country

To: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org
Subject:
"autumn wind" kukai

Submissions: Wednesday, September 01, 2010 – Thursday, October 21, 2010 Midnight.

Voting: Friday, October 22, 2010 - Saturday, October 29, 2010, Midnight.

The results will be published in the Sunday, October 31, 2010 Sketchbook 5-5 Results of the September / October 2010 "autumn wind" Kukai.

Letters to the Sketchbook editors and discussions on various forums indicate that some assumptions about a kukai must be spelled out. From now on (April 1, 2008), Haiku entered in the Sketchbook kukai must be  previously unpublished; they must not be workshopped; they must not appear on any list, forum, group, blog, or in print. In short, if the haiku has appeared on the internet or in print we consider it to have been published. The voting in a kukai is anonymous and publication anywhere voids anonyminity. Any haiku found to be previously published will be disqualified.

A kukai is a peered review poetry contest. A haiku Topic is assigned by the editor. An 'anonymized' list of submitted haiku is then distributed to all participating poets and they are invited to vote. Votes are returned to the editor who tallies the votes and publishes the haiku for the participants, this time with names and points revealed.
 

These twenty-seven poems from ten countries contributed 70 haiku to the "autumn wind" Kukai:

Ralf Bröker, DE; Bouwe Brouwer, NL; Cezar-FlorianCiobîca, FR; Magdalena Dale, RO;John Daleiden, US; Andrzej Dembończyk, PL; Claire Everett, UK;Ignatius Fay, CA; Bernard Gieske, US; George Hawkins, US; George Holman, Cara US; Marleen Hulst, NL; Alegria Imperial, CA;
Ramona Linke, DE; Jacek Margolak, PL; Thomas Martin, US; Diane Mayr, US; John McDonald, UK; Vasile Moldovan, RO; Aju Mukhopadhyay, IN; Reason A. Poteet, US; Alex Serban, RO; Keith A. Simmonds, TT; Brian Strand, UK; Sunil Uniyal, IN; Althea Rowe Watson, US; Neal Whitman, US.

Canada, France, Germany, India, Netherlands, Poland, Romania, Trinidad and Tobago, United Kingdom (England), United States

 

1st Place

laundry day
an autumn wind wears
his shirt

# 20. Bouwe Brouwer, NL

1 3 5 14 1st Place

 

2nd Place

autumn
no hair to catch
the wind

# 02. George Hawkins, US

2 1 1 9 2nd Place

 

3rd Place

autumn wind
a father looks for
his kite

# 12. Ralf Bröker, DE

1 1 3 8 3rd Place Tie

 

autumn wind—
leaves covering
our shadows

# 66. Cezar-Florian Ciobîcă, FR

2 1 0 8 3rd Place Tie

 

4th Place

autumn wind
losing the argument
with my boss

# 40. Marleen Hulst, NL

1 0 3 6 4th Place Tie

 

5th Place

a lost butterfly
fights against the current—
autumn wind

# 03. Alex Serban, RO

0 2 1 5 5th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
the subtle taste of ashes
in our food

# 26. George Hawkins, US

1 0 2 5 5th Place Tie

 

searching his coat
she finds the smell
of autumn wind

# 35. Ralf Bröker, DE

0 2 1 5 5th Place Tie

 

the vulture
circling it's shadow
autumn wind

# 69. Althea Rowe Watson, US

1 1 0 5

 

6th Place

two old lovers
walking in tight embrace...
autumn wind

# 09. Keith A. Simmonds, TT

0 1 2 4 6th Place Tie

 

my neighbors and I
swap gossip and leaves—
autumn wind

# 18. Cara Holman, US

0 1 2 4 6th Place Tie

 

this autumn wind
unfolds my memory book…
leaf after leaf

# 25. Magdalena Dale, RO

0 1 2 4 6th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
she sends some leaves by post

# 29. Thomas Martin, US

0 1 2 4 6th Place Tie

 

wet window
the autumn colors come
with the wind

# 43. Jacek Margolak, PL

0 1 2 4 6th Place Tie

 

through the darkness
the whisper of her yes—
autumn wind

# 46. John Daleiden, US

0 1 2 4 6th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
rearranging the leaves
in the zen garden

# 62. Bouwe Brouwer, NL

0 1 2 4 6th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
as each sand hill crane
steps out of a pose

# 70. Althea Rowe Watson, US

1 0 1 4 6th Place Tie

 

7th Place

coming soon
autumn wind
circus of leaves

# 05. Bernard Gieske, US

0 1 1 3 7th Place Tie

 

autumn wind—
the chapel door
closes early

# 07. Alegria Imperial, CA

0 1 1 3 7th Place Tie

 

hanging rain drops
in the old oak grove
autumn wind

# 11. Neal Whitman, US

 

eaf by leaf
my carefully chosen words
autumn wind

# 15. Claire Everett, UK

0 0 3 3 7th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
the tire swing
a pendulum

# 42. Bouwe Brouwer, NL

0 1 1 3 7th Place Tie

 

a buck leaping
over the fallen tree—
autumn wind

# 55. Neal Whitman, US

1 0 0 3 7th Place Tie

 

brushing her cheek
before he leaves
autumn wind

# 59. Claire Everett, UK

1 0 0 3 7th Place Tie

 

autumn wind—
dressing the scarecrow
with my father's top coat

# 67. Cezar-Florian Ciobîcă, FR

0 1 1 3 7th Place Tie

 

8th Place

autumn wind—
a whistling boy
through the fallen leaves

# 10. John McDonald, UK (Scotland)

0 0 2 2 8th Place Tie

 

yellow leaves
up and down up and down—
autumn wind

# 22. Andrzej Dembończyk, PL

0 0 2 2 8th Place Tie

 

autumn wind—
small spiders
fly away

# 44. Andrzej Dembończyk, PL

0 1 0 2 8th Place Tie

 

Between forests
the wind sweeps away
the last leaf

# 45. Vasile Moldovan, RO

0 1 0 2 8th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
the whipoorwill
calls the evening

# 50. Thomas Martin, US

0 0 2 2 8th Place Tie

 

dance arbour
nothing but autumn wind

# 56. Ralf Bröker, DE

0 0 2 2 8th Place Tie

 

autumn winds—
the meadow grass turns green
in mountain valleys

# 65. John Daleiden, US

0 1 0 2 8th Place Tie

 

9th Place

autumn wind...
the clatter of cornstalks
tied to a lamppost

# 04. Diane Mayr, US
 

0 0 1 1 9th Place Tie

 

after the concert
... strong autumn wind
beats the high tide

# 14. Ramona Linke, DE

0 0 1 1 9th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
styles my hair
for free

# 16. Reason A. Poteet, US

0 0 1 1 9th Place Tie

 

autumn wind—
dry leaves on the sidewalk
chase each other

# 19. Sunil Uniyal, India

0 0 1 1 9th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
dropped letter
dodging his reach

# 28. Bernard Gieske, US

0 0 1 1 9th Place Tie

 

paper moon—
too high
for the autumn wind

# 30. Alegria Imperial, CA

0 0 1 1 9th Place Tie

 

autumn wind––
weaving my way home
under patchy skies

# 34. Neal Whitman, US

0 0 1 1 9th Place Tie

 

autumn wind—
the robin's red breast
warming

# 54. John McDonald, UK (Scotland)

0 0 1 1 9th Place Tie

 

Autumn is coming
Only the wind plays
in the bandshell

# 58. Ramona Linke, DE

0 0 1 1 9th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
the clothes on the line
still damp

# 60. Marleen Hulst, NL

0 0 1 1 9th Place Tie

 

morning chill—
hickory smoke carried
on the autumn wind

# 61. Cara Holman, US

0 0 1 1 9th Place Tie

 

All alone in the night...
listening to the sound
of autumn wind

# 64. Vasile Moldovan, RO

0 0 1 1 9th Place Tie

 

10th Place

upon the Autumn wind
summer's warm caress departs—
where are my salopettes

# 01. Brian Strand, UK

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
traces of the black circle
where she burned the leaves

# 06.

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

cool autumn wind
smearing the rapeseed
bank called our loan

# 08. Ignatius Fay, CA

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn wind flows
keeping its yearly promise—
once again

# 13. Aju Mukhopadhyay, IN

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
taking the day off
to go to the beach

# 17. Marleen Hulst, NL

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn morning
the creak and rattle
from an old windmill

# 21. Jacek Margolak, PL

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

Chestnut leaves
falling one by one—
autumn wind

# 23. Vasile Moldovan, RO

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
over the mountain—
hail breaks my windshield

# 24. John Daleiden, US

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

trout helped
in mountain river—
autumn wind

# 27. Alex Serban, RO

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
the dying embers
cast faint ghosts

# 31. Ignatius Fay, CA

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn wind...
leaves falling into
an assembly of leaves

# 32. Keith A. Simmonds, TT

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
toppling the summer
—house

# 33. John McDonald, UK (Scotland)

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn wind calls
reminding that she was here—
last year

# 36. Aju Mukhopadhyay, IN

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

Autumn wind—
sunny flickering falls
out of the birch

# 37. Ramona Linke, DE

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

no one hears the stars
nailing down the tin roof sky
autumn wind

# 38.

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

the voice of death
sings its dirge
autumn wind

# 39. Reason A. Poteet, US

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn wind—
a maple leaf
falling up

# 41. Cara Holman, US

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

so many sighs
lost in the autumn wind…
heart’s music

# 47. Magdalena Dale, RO

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

mowing
beneath the chimes—
autumn wind

#

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
turning the scenic pages
of October

# 49. Bernard Gieske, US

 

flaming trees
but not fanned
by the autumn wind

# 51. Alegria Imperial, CA

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn wind…
urgent need to pee
knot in my shoelace

# 52. Ignatius Fay, CA

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

the full moon
basking in crimson glow—
autumn wind

# 53. Keith A. Simmonds, TT

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn wind
breathes a sigh
as it passes away

# 57. Aju Mukhopadhyay, IN

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

autumn moon
through tall windblown reeds
a white sail

# 63. Jacek Margolak, PL

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 

with the strength
of thirty-three miners
autumn wind

# 68.

0 0 0 0 10th Place Tie

 


Hello Haiku Poet,

Below is the ballot for the Sketchbook July / August “coolness / heat” Kukai vote.

Please NOTE that the votes should be sent to:

kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org

CALL FOR Sketchbook July / August “coolness / heat” Kukai vote:
Voting: Sunday, August 22 - Saturday, August 28, 2010, Midnight.



1. All the entries are listed on the ballot by number.
2. Only submitting Kukai Poets are eligible to vote.
3. Email your votes to: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org When voting, please use the words coolness / heat” Kukai vote in the subject line of your e-mail.
4. Each poet has SIX (6) points to use for the kukai vote. Voters may distribute the points in increments of 1, 2, or 3. You may not cast more than 3 points for any single poem.
5. Please do not vote for your own poem(s). Any such votes will be disqualified.
6. Please use the following format to submit your votes (listing by numerical order, rather than order of preference, as the sample below):

To: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org
Subject: “coolness / heat” Kukai vote

Each voter has 6 points:

     # 03 = 1 pt.
     # 11 = 2 pts.
     # 28 = 3 pts.

7. All votes will be compiled and the haiku will then be published in the Tuesday, August 31, 2010 Sketchbook with votes received; on the names of the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd, etc. place poets' names will be revealed.

Please indicate with your ballot one of these choices:

     Yes, reveal my name even if my haiku receive 0 votes
     No, remove my name if my haiku receive 0 votes

Poets who do not include one of the above statements will have their name published with each haiku.

The voting results will appear as per the following sample:

0 2 7 11 = ____ Place

Which means: No voter gave 3 points, 2 voters gave 2 points, 7 voters gave 1 point = for a total of 11 points.

CALL FOR Sketchbook July / August “coolness / heat” Kukai vote:
Voting: Sunday, August 22 - Saturday, August 28, 2010, Midnight.
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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