
Results of the
March / April 2010 "spring rain" Kukai
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Announcing
March / April 2010 "spring rain" Kukai
The
March / April 2010
Kukai theme is
"spring rain". Use the exact words
"spring rain"
in the haiku. No more
than a total of three haiku may be submitted. Haiku
submitted to the kukai should not be workshopped, appear
on-line in forums, or in print.
Haiku
Author,
Country
To:
kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org
Subject: "spring
rain" kukai
Submissions:
Monday, March 01, 2010 – Saturday, April 17, 2010 Midnight.
Voting: Sunday,
April 18 - Sunday April 25, 2010,
Midnight.
The results will
be published in the Friday, April 30, 2010
Sketchbook.
Letters to the
Sketchbook editors and discussions on
various forums indicate that some assumptions about a
kukai must be spelled out. From now on (April 1, 2008),
Haiku entered in the Sketchbook
kukai must be previously unpublished; they must
not be workshopped; they must not appear on any list,
forum, group, blog, or in print. In short, if the haiku
has appeared on the internet or in print we consider it
to have been published. The voting in a kukai is
anonymous and publication anywhere voids anonyminity.
Any haiku found to be previously published will be
disqualified.
A kukai is a peered
review poetry contest. A haiku Topic is assigned by the
editor. An 'anonymized' list of submitted haiku is then
distributed to all participating poets and they are
invited to vote. Votes are returned to the editor who
tallies the votes and publishes the haiku for the
participants, this time with names and points revealed.
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The following twenty-five haiku poets
participated in the Kukai:
Willie Bongcaron, PH; Loren Brockway, NL; Ralf Bröker,
DE; Bouwe Brouwer, NL; John Daleiden, US; Tatjana
Debeljacki, SR; Andrzej Dembo ńczyk,
PL; John McDonald, UK (Scotland); Bernard Gieske, US;
Michele Harvey US; Cara Holman, US; Krzysztof Kokot, PL;
Catherine J.S. Lee, US; Ramona Linke, DE; Jacek Margolak,
PL; Dejan Pavlinovic, CR; Zhanna P. Rader, US; Keith A.
Simmonds, TT; Heike Stehr, DE; Brian Strand, UK
(England); Elaine Whitman, US; Neal Whitman, US; Rafal
Zabartyniski, PL; Leon Zeldis, IL
Poets from the following
nine countries contributed to the Kukai:
Croatia, Germany, Netherlands, Philippines, Poland,
Serbia, Trinidad and Tobago, United Kingdom (England,
Scotland), United States
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1st Place
spring rain—
clattering of chairs
from the pavement cafe
# 44. John Mc Donald, UK (Scotland)
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2nd Place
spring
rain
paint flakes
from the gnome
# 18. Bouwe Brouwer,
NL
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3rd Place
spring rain—
one after the other
dandelions
# 61. John Daleiden, US
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4th Place
Spring rain
falls on my son's grave—
the crocuses closed.
# 17. Zhanna P. Rader, US
spring rain—
nestled between oak roots
a new mushroom
# 49. Elaine Whitman, US
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5th Place
spring rain
the peepers
change their pitch
# 04. Michele Harvey, US
spring rain—
an earthworm
shortens and spreads
# 53. Jacek Margolak, PL
the metallic tang
of fresh-turned earth
spring rain
# 54. Catherine J. S. Lee, US
I watch the spring
rain
reviving my garden—
a mockingbird's song...
# 56. Zhanna P. Rader, US
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6th Place
blackbird's beak
dripping
spring rain
# 24. John Mc Donald, UK (Scotland)
spring rain
my son's excuse
to comb his hair
# 25. Bernard Gieske, US
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7th Place
laughing eyes
in spring rain
her dress slides down
# 01. Heike Stehr, DE
spring raindrops
the peacock
unfolds its fan
# 03. Bernard Gieske, US
spring rain—
a man kisses a woman
under the viaduct
# 21. Andrzej Dembończyk, PL
with your eyes
closed
imagine the desert blooms—
spring rains arrive
# 43. John Daleiden, US
picnic at the park
after the spring rain
hopscotching puddles
# 45. Bernard Gieske, US
spring rain
the wet street reflects
flashing amber lights
# 64. Rafal Zabratynski, PL
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8th Place
a rainbow
across the lush hills—
spring rain
# 08. Keith A. Simmonds, TT
spring rain—
vivid colours of flowers
on the old umbrella
# 19. Krzysztof Kokot, PL
verdant mountain tops
reaching for the morning sun...
the glow of spring rain
# 28. Keith A. Simmonds, TT
spring rain
out of the plush moon drips
a lullaby
# 31. Ramona Linke, DE
spring rain
the baby's name
never used
# 46. Michele Harvey, US
spring rain
a profusion of umbrellas
spring up
# 52. Cara Holman, US
fleeing
before the sun
spring rain
# 63. Dejan Pavlinovic, CR
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9th Place
Spring
raindrops freezing
again
# 10. Ralf Bröker, DE
wet glass tears
upon the window pane
spring rains return
# 13. Cara Holman, US
spring rain
in my window box
the rainbow of primroses
# 14. Jacek Margolak, PL
spring rain
through the half-leaved apple
roosting robins
# 15. Catherine J. S. Lee, US
Spring rain has arrived
And the birds are flying north
My heart is still cold
# 22. Leon Zeldis, IL
spring rain at dawn
I hear a silent anthem
through the maple grove
# 32. Neal Whitman, US
Spring rain
curls up a little girl's hair—
her cheerful singing...
# 37. Zhanna P. Rader, US
spring rain
the snowman bows
it’s head
# 38. Bouwe Brouwer, NL
spring rain...
myriad mushrooms
rising everywhere
# 48. Keith A. Simmonds, TT
spring rain
the call draws a signal
to some sleeping seeds
# 55. Willie R. Bongcaron, PH
spring rain
fresh patches
of shredded wood
# 57. Bouwe Brouwer, NL
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10th Place
young lovers kiss
in spring rain—
buds swelling
# 02.
Rainy autumn
on the window pane
wind is whirring
# 05.
spring rain, stop and go
spoiled all the winter flowers
covered our new beds
# 06. Loren Brockway, NL
spring rain today
how green my memories—
ah I live again
# 07.
first cup
by firelight
spring rain rain rain
# 09.
spring's night rain
barefoot
at the seam of light
# 11. Ramona Linke, DE
duskfall
the sound of spring rain…
or quaking aspens?
# 12. Neal Whitman, US
spring rain
will it ever kiss
my greenhouse?
# 16. Willie R. Bongcaron, PH
spring rain
in my window box
the rainbow of primroses
# 20.
in the first spring rain
street children dance with glee—
earthquake dust
# 23. John Daleiden, US
just where
the tire swing was
spring rain
# 26.
spring rain
down the rocky ground
I'm riding a white horse
# 27.
spring rain
daffodils bow in the garden
each neck stretched long
# 29.
Sunday in april
the old umbrella—
where is it?
# 30.
peonies bow to earth
top-heavy
from spring rain
# 33.
the spring rain
through the open window
a swallow's twitter
# 34.
spring rain
beads the blue hyacinths . . .
your last letter
# 35.
spring rain
the high-pitched screech
of a Barred Owl
# 36.
spring rain—
filled up with water
tracks on the path
# 39.
the spring rain
through the open window
a swallow's twitter
# 40.
after the spring rain—
appear on the grass
first earthworm
# 41.
The snow on my Head
Will not melt with the spring rain
Sadness washes off
# 42.
I am treading mud
under a linden in the rain—
tempest of love
# 47.
early spring rain
gentle on my shaker roof
still time to hunker
# 51.
under the wet dress
girlish breasts
# 58.
This is singing time
Dance with joy in the spring rain
Minstrel, cry no more
# 60.
salvage yard
a rusty pickup catches
spring rain
# 62.
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Hello Haiku Poet,
Voting: Sunday, April
18, 2010 - Sunday, April 25, 2010, Midnight.
The results will be published in the Friday, April 30, 2010
Sketchbook.
1. All the entries are listed on the ballot by number.
2. Only submitting Kukai Poets are eligible to vote.
3. Email your votes to: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org When
voting, please use the words “spring rain” Kukai in the subject
line of your e-mail.
4. Each poet has SIX (6) points to use for the kukai vote.
Voters may distribute the points in increments of 1, 2, or 3.
You may not cast more than 3 points for any single poem.
5. Please do not vote for your own poem(s). Any such votes will
be disqualified.
6. Please use the following format to submit your votes (listing
by numerical order, rather than order of preference, as the
sample below):
To: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org
Subject: “spring rain” Kukai Vote
Each voter has 6 points:
# 03 = 1 pt.
# 11 = 2 pts.
# 28 = 3 pts.
7. All votes will be compiled and the haiku will then be
published in the Friday, April 30, 2010, 2010 Sketchbook
to be released with votes received; on the names of the 1st,
2nd, and 3rd, etc. place poets' names will be revealed. Haiku
receiving 0 votes will be published without names. If you want
your name revealed regardless of the number of votes received
please notify the kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org with the
submission of your votes.
The votes will appear as per the following sample:
0 2 7 11 = ____ Place
Which means: No voter gave 3 points, 2 voters gave 2 points, 7
voters gave 1 point = for a total of 11 points.
CALL FOR
Sketchbook Mar/April “spring rain” Kukai vote:
Voting: Sunday, April 18, 2010 - Sunday, April 25, 2010,
Midnight.
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