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Results of the November/December 31, 2009 "year ends"  Kukai
 

 

 



Announcing November / December 2009 "the year ends" Kukai

The November / December 2009 Kukai theme is "the year ends". Use the exact words "the year ends"  in the haiku. No more than a total of three haiku may be submitted. Haiku submitted to the kukai should not be workshopped, appear on-line in forums, or in print.

Haiku

Author, Country

To: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org
Subject: "the year ends" kukai

Submissions: Sunday, November 01, 2009 – Sunday, December 20, 2009 Midnight.

Voting: Monday, December 21 - Monday, December 28, 2009, Midnight.

The results will be published in the Thursday, December 31, 2009 Sketchbook.

Letters to the Sketchbook editors and discussions on various forums indicate that some assumptions about a kukai must be spelled out. From now on (April 1, 2008), Haiku entered in the Sketchbook kukai must be previously unpublished; they must not be workshopped; they must not appear on any list, forum, group, blog, or in print. In short, if the haiku has appeared on the internet or in print we consider it to have been published. The voting in a kukai is anonymous and publication anywhere voids anonyminity. Any haiku found to be previously published will be disqualified.

A kukai is a peered review poetry contest. A haiku Topic is assigned by the editor. An 'anonymized' list of submitted haiku is then distributed to all participating poets and they are invited to vote. Votes are returned to the editor who tallies the votes and publishes the haiku for the participants, this time with names and points revealed.
 

 

Results

 

the year ends
the weight of the snow
on an old fence

 # 75. Jacek Margolak, PL

1

4

4

15

1st Place

 

 

year ends—
will my dreams find room
in the next one?

# 15. Zhanna P. Rader, US

3

0

2

11

2nd Place

 

 

year end
I toast the moon
with a full cup

 # 21. Audrey Downey, US

1

1

3

8

3rd Place Tie

 

carrying a hay-fork
full of dry fragrance to the mare—
the year ends

# 24. D. V. Rozic, CR

1

1

3

8

3rd Place Tie

 

the year ends—
mother gazing at the stars
naming absent friends

 # 69. John McDonald, UK

1

2

1

8

3rd Place Tie

 

the year ends
the stack of unread books
next to my bed

 # 102. Jacek Margolak, PL

1

1

3

8

3rd Place Tie

 

 

the year ends...
on a brand new calendar
she counts nine months

 # 16. Michelle L. Harvey, US

1

1

2

7

4th Place Tie

 

city square—
Advent and Hanukkah candles
among the neon lights

 # 60. Tomislav Maretic, CR

1

2

0

7

4th Place Tie

 

 

the year ends
a look inside out
of my empty pocket

# 13. Willie R. Bongcaron, PH

1

1

1

6

5th Place Tie

 

the year ends—
the thread on this spool
all used up

# 36. John Daleiden, US

1

1

1

6

5th Place Tie

 

the year ends...
footprints in the snow
left behind

# 38. Dejan Pavlinovic, CR

1

1

1

6

5th Place Tie

 

 

the year ends
preparing to lose
all that weight again

# 62. Bob Lucky, CH

0

0

5

5

6th Place

 

 

twilight at midnight—
twins born as the year ends
with the sound of joy

# 03. Daniela Bullas, UK

1

0

1

4

7th  Place

 

the year ends
with mom's smile
in every mirror

# 07. Rita Odeh, IL

0

1

2

4

7th  Place

 

the year ends
shadows stretch across the snow

# 11. Martin Cohen, US

0

0

4

4

7th  Place

 

frozen laundry
on the rope—
shapes of the wind

# 23. Tomislav Maretic, CR

1

0

1

4

7th  Place

 

the year ends
a prayer for peace
at midnight

# 26. Patricia Carragon, US

0

1

2

4

7th  Place

 

making a bath
for my very old granny—
another year ends

# 61. D. V. Rozic, CR

1

0

1

4

7th  Place

 

the year ends— 
I re-list last year`s
resolutions

# 83. Robert Naczas, PL

0

0

4

4

7th  Place

 

a thousand lights
on the future city square—
the year ends

# 01. Sasa Vazic, SR

1

0

1

4

7th  Place

 

 

her jeans
like the year that ends
worn and torn

# 05. Bernard Gieske, US

0

1

1

3

8th Place

 

odds defied
again the year ends
—terminal illness

# 06. Ignatius Fay, CA

0

0

3

3

8th Place

 

the year ends
bathing in the beautiful shine
of the snow moon

# 32. Ramona Linke, DE

0

1

1

3

8th Place

 

bold rockets
in the starry night—
the year ends

# 37. Juhani Tikkanen, FI

1

0

0

3

8th Place

 

the year ends
last of the chimney smoke
finds its way

# 78. Harvey Jenkins, CA

0

1

1

3

8th Place

 

the year ends

auld lang syne echoes

into eternity

 

# 02. Brian Strand, UK

0

1

0

2

9th Place

 

the year ends
a hard rain falls
on wrinkled leaves

# 04. Harvey Jenkins, CA

0

0

2

2

9th Place

 

shortest day—
earth tilts away from the sun
as the year ends

# 28. Frances Shaffi, US

0

0

2

2

9th Place

 

the year ends
whisky breaths
kissing

# 33. John McDonald, UK

0

0

2

2

9th Place

 

one last kiss
to the frozen window silhouettes
the year ends

# 44. Sasa Vazic, SR

0

0

2

2

9th Place

 

the year ends—
in an old Christmas tree
the sparrows nest

# 49. Dragan J. Ristic, SR

0

0

2

2

9th Place

 

Warning Sign:
Beware of collapsing cliffs––
the year ends

# 51. Neal Whitman, US

 

the year ends with the long shadow of the prairie dog

# 52. Martin Cohen, US

0

0

2

2

9th Place

 

year ends—
moving my hopes
to the next month

# 56. Zhanna P. Rader, US

0

0

2

2

9th Place

 

the year ends...
the final decision
to let her hair go grey

# 57. Michelle L. Harvey, US

0

0

2

2

9th Place

 

the year ends
our lips meet
at midnight

# 63. Patricia Carragon, US

0

0

2

2

9th Place

 

the year ends
also at my ancestors' graves
covered in deep snow

# 77. Sasa Vazic, SR

0

0

2

2

9th Place

 

not a regret
nor a dozen frowns...
the year ends

# 87. Willie R. Bongcaron, PH

0

0

2

2

9th Place

 

cold winds
lost into the starry sky—
the year ends

# 100. Juhani Tikkanen, FI

0

1

0

2

9th Place

 

how long will it take
to fill this emptiness?—
the year ends

 # 101. Barbara A Taylor, AU

0

0

2

2

9th Place

 

 

housebound
solitaire played out
the year ends

# 10. Neal Whitman, US

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

out of ink
please replace cartridge
the year ends

# 14. Gerry Bravi, CA

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

the year ends;
a snake slithering
into tall grass

# 18. Chen-ou Liu, CA

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

years end—
on the electric wires
an old red rag

# 19. Jadran Zalokar, CR

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

frayed silk rose
I give blood for a friend of a friend
the year ends

# 20. John Thompson, US

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

the year ends
on my last turn
I roll a yahtzee

# 29. Cindy Tebo, US

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

the year ends—
long holiday's on Hawaii
not damn likely

# 35. Krzysztof Kokot, PL

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

the year ends...
marking family birthdays
on the new calendar

# 40. André Surridge, NZ

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

as the year ends
I think of what ifs
and what might have beens

# 43. Victor P. Gendrano, US

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

let’em not
bubble up at the year ends-
memories

# 59. Aju Mukhopadhyay, IN

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

the year ends
still awaiting completion
of their new home

# 74. Barbara A Taylor, AU

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

ongoing issues
lack of resolutions
—the year ends

 # 80. Ignatius Fay, CA

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

the year ends...
a rainbow plunges
into the ocean

# 86. Keith A. Simmonds, TT

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

the year ends...
the smell of pine needles
on the sidewalk

# 88. Michelle L. Harvey, US

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

clear winter sky—
geminids disappear above
the snowy mountain

# 90. Tomislav Maretic, CR

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

this beautiful
calendar ends just because
the year ends...

# 91. D. V. Rozic, CR

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

memories flow—
in an elusive torrent
the year ends

# 94. Frances Shaffi, US

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

Auld Lang Syne drifts down
new song flies on summer sky
the year ends

# 96. Karin Anderson, AU

0

0

1

1

10th Place

 

 

who is thinking
about the new beginning?
the year ends

# 08. Dragan J. Ristic, SR

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends—
I carry chopped wood
to warm up

# 09. Robert Naczas, PL

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

a pale sun
piercing through grey clouds...
the year ends

# 12. Keith A. Simmonds, TT

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

year ends...
with three birthdays
busted bank account

# 17 Shanna Baldwin Moore, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends...
I'm still
bachelor

# 22. Andrzej Dembończyk, PL

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends
my son’s financial aid
applications

# 25. Bob Lucky, CH

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

a kestrel broods
on the stork parking sign ...
the year ends

# 27. Robert Bauer, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

lake's reeds furl streamers
frog's conks leap their length
the year ends

# 30. Karin Anderson, AU

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

Sea rocks are icy
Our bicycles are piled up
The year ends with snow

# 31. Leslie Brockway, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends—
across a frozen garden
butterfly wing

# 34. Peter H. Pache, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

beginning of the year ends of a garden bridge

# 39. Ralf Broker, DE

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends—
unkempt lawns remind me
of your absence

# 41. Barbara A Taylor, AU

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends
cloudy sky
speckled with stars

# 42. Jacek Margolak, PL

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends
my son’s first word
is  why

# 45. Harvey Jenkins, CA

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

1912 overture
when the year ends
trumpet blasts

# 46. Bernard Gieske, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

They’ve gone forever
with the year ends;
why look for them?

# 47. Aju Mukhopadhyay, IN

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

 

with
mom's last song
the year ends

# 48. Rita Odeh, IL

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends— 
on my bank statement
only greetings

# 50. Robert Naczas, PL

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

swine flu in tandem
with the Wall Street blues:
the year ends

# 53. Keith A. Simmonds, TT

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

snow falls
in a distant shore
the year ends

# 54/ Willie Bongcron, PH

 

Resolutions:  2010
with a list of new beginnings
the year ends

# 55. Gerry Bravi, CA

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

a coin tossed
into a wishing well—
the year ends

# 58. Chen-ou Liu, CA

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends ...
sharing a secret
with a foster child

 # 64. Robert Bauer, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends
in waning solar time—
a new year begins 

# 65. Frances Shaffi, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

keeping its resolution
the year ends
with a blue moon 

# 66. Cindy Tebo, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

a trillion candles
headwind stuck in earth's bowl
explodes,  the year ends

# 67. Karin Anderson, AU

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends—
hiding my secret again
in grandma's bandbox 

# 68. Ramona Linke, DE

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends
everyone is playing
and I'm sleeping well

# 70. Krzysztof Kokot, PL

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

I'm in love,
come sail away with me—
tonight the year ends

# 71. John Daleiden, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

forgotten promises
buried under a new snow—
the year ends  

# 72. Juhani Tikkanen, FI

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

 

formal call
the old man does not know
that the year ends 

# 73. Ralf Broker, DE

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

as the year ends
thanking my God, I ask
how can I do better 

# 76. Victor P. Gendrano, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

heavy with ice
the old oak tree falls
as the year ends

 # 79. Bernard Gieske, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends—
that  raging wave
starts retreating 

# 81. Rita Odeh, IL

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends—
a boy jumps in the river
after "vodka"

# 82. Dragan J. Ristic, SR

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

TV flickering
eyes closed… a book on my lap
the year ends

# 84. Neal Whitman, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends in the dusk of frozen spittle

# 85. Martin Cohen, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

end of the year—
the seagull's wings rest
on the grass

# 89. Jadran Zalokar, CR

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends
thin strands of hair
tangled in the comb

# 92. Bob Lucky, CH

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends
reflections on
December 31

# 93. Patricia Carragon, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends—
a ladybug's reflection
crossing the mirror 

# 95. Cindy Tebo, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends—
all over town
spent rockets 

# 97. John McDonald, UK

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

the year ends—
above a glass of champagne
many ideas 

# 98. Krzysztof Kokot, PL

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

my anchor up—
sailing into the red sky
as the year ends 

# 99. John Daleiden, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

as the year ends
I realize that time and life
are but fleeting 

# 103. Victor P. Gendrano, US

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

grandfather's watch ticks—
at year's end the coffee room
clock moves silently 

# 104. Jadran Zalokar, CR

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

 

the year ends—
unused party tickets
frozen gas line

 

# 105. Ignatius Fay, CA

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

At the year ends
Pray for the bright and new,
Rejuvenating few. 

# 106. Aju Mukhopadhyay, IN

0

0

0

0

11th Place

 

 


Hello Haiku Poet,

Below is the ballot for the Sketchbook Nov/Dec 2009 “year ends” Kukai vote.

Please NOTE that the votes should be sent to:

kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org

CALL FOR Sketchbook Nov/Dec 2009 “year ends” Kukai vote:
Voting: Monday, December 21, 2009 – Monday, December 28, 2009, Midnigh
t.


1. All the entries are listed on the ballot by number.
2. Only submitting Kukai Poets are eligible to vote.
3. Email your votes to: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org When voting, please use the words “year ends" Kukai in the subject line of your e-mail.
4. Each poet has SIX (6) points to use for the kukai vote. Voters may distribute the points in increments of 1, 2, or 3. You may not cast more than 3 points for any single poem.
5. Please do not vote for your own poem(s). Any such votes will be disqualified.
6. Please use the following format to submit your votes (listing by numerical order, rather than order of preference, as the sample below):

To: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org
Subject: “year ends" Kukai Vote

Each voter has 6 points:

# 03 = 1 pt.
# 11 = 2 pts.
# 28 = 3 pts.

7. All votes will be compiled and the haiku will then be published in the Thursday December 31, 2009 Sketchbook to be released the first week of January 2010 with votes received; on the names of the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd, etc. place poets' names will be revealed. Haiku receiving 0 votes will be published without names. If you want your name revealed regardless of the number of votes received please notify the kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org with the submission of your votes.

The votes will appear as per the following sample:

0 2 7 11 = ____ Place

Which means: No voter gave 3 points, 2 voters gave 2 points, 7 voters gave 1 point = for a total of 11 points.

CALL FOR Sketchbook Nov/Dec 2009 “year ends” Kukai
vote:
Voting: Monday, December 21, 2009 – Monday, December 28, 2009, Midnight.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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