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Results of the February 2009 "hazy moon" Kukai
 

 

 

 

Announcing "hazy moon" February 2009 Kukai

The February 2009 Kukai theme is "hazy moon". Use the exact words ""hazy moon"  in the haiku. No more than a total of three haiku may be submitted. Haiku submitted to the kukai should not be workshopped, appear on-line in forums, or in print.

Haiku

Author, Country

To: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org
Subject:"hazy moon" kukai

Submissions: Thursday January 01, 2009 – Tuesday, February 17, 2009 Midnight.

Voting:  Wednesday, February 18, 2009 – Tuesday, February 24, 2009, Midnight.

The results will be published in the Saturday, February 28, 2009 Sketchbook.

Recent letters to the Sketchbook editors and discussions on various forums indicate that some assumptions about a kukai must be spelled out. From now on (April 1, 2008), Haiku entered in the Sketchbook kukai must be previously unpublished; they must not be workshopped; they must not appear on any list, forum, group, blog, or in print. In short, if the haiku has appeared on the internet or in print we consider it to have been published. The voting in a kukai is anonymous and publication anywhere voids anonyminity. Any haiku found to be previously published will be disqualified.
 

 

hazy moon—
the boatman's shadow
sneezes too

# 54. Vasile Moldovan, RO

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12

1st Place

 

hazy moon
ferns of frost etched
on the windowpanes

# 78. Catherine J. S. Lee, US

2 1 3 11 2nd Place

 

hazy moon
the slightly bitter taste
of green tea

# 61. Christopher Herold, US

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2

2

9

3rd Place

 

public sauna
a hazy moon
in every mirror

# 22. Jacek Margolak, PL

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6

8

4th Place

 

hazy moon
the canyon fills
with shadows

# 47. Jacek Margolak, PL

0

2

3

7

5th Place Tie

 

waking up                 
in another place…
hazy moon

# 02. Barbara A Taylor, AU

0

1

4

6

6th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
trying to remember
his kiss

# 09. Judith Gorgone, US

0

1

4

6

6th Place Tie

 

an awkward pause    
in our conversation—
the hazy moon

# 38. Christopher Herold, US

1

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3

6

6th Place Tie

 

in spite of my hurry       
I pause...           
hazy moon          

07. Robin Beshers, US

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1

3

5

7th Place Tie

 

hazy moon—
still no news
of their runaway son

# 14. Victor P. Gendrano, US

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5

7th Place Tie

 

smoothing the wrinkles
out of the pillowcases . . .
hazy moon 

# 19. Francine Banwarth, US

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3

5

7th Place Tie

 

hazy moon—
       the mountains
lost at sea

# 34. Kristin Reynolds, US

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1

3

5

7th Place Tie

 

hazy moon...
still I wait for his
call

# 43. Tanya Dikova, IL

0

1

3

5

7th Place Tie

 

an overgrown path
that must have led somewhere . . .
hazy moon

# 69B. Bill Kenney, US

0

1

3

5

7th Place Tie

 

a slight wobble
to one of the stepping stones
hazy moon

# 10. Christopher Herold, US

0

1

3

5

7th Place Tie

 

a train rumbles past
leaving the silence behind:
hazy moon 

# 39. Keith A. Simmonds, TT

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1

2

4

8th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
the crickets...
off cue

# 41. Eric V "El Coyote", US

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4

8th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
in a dusty hatbox
a lost valentine

# 60. Judith Gorgone, US

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4

8th Place Tie

 

silent hunting cat
stalks beneath the hazy moon
for unwary rats

# 65. Deirdre Godwin, CA

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4

8th Place Tie

 

hazy moon—
sounds of a river rising
out of its bed

# 69A. John Thompson, US

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1

2

4

8th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
the distance of your voice
filled with anger

# 70 John Daleiden, US

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1

2

4

8th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
the rooster’s hoarse cry
all night long

# 81
Elehna de Sousa, CA

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2

0

4

8th Place Tie

 

steaming dumplings 
—through the window
a hazy moon—

# 04. John McDonald, UK

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0

3

3

9th Place Tie

 

hazy moon—
the wolf
hunkers down

# 05. Kristin Reynolds, US

0

0

3

3

9th Place Tie

 

hazy moon—
fingers of fog
across our faces

# 08. Peter H. Pache, US

0

0

3

3

9th Place Tie

 

afterwards
her fingers trace his spine
—hazy moon

# 12. Doris Kasson, US

0

1

1

3

9th Place Tie

 

Winter time—
through the vapours of lime tea
hazy moon

# 28. Magdalena Dale, RO

0

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1

3

9th Place Tie

 

a lighthouse beacon
beneath the hazy moon
I zip my jacket

# 29. John Daleiden, US

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1

3

9th Place Tie

 

cold winter night
the wind howls
at the hazy moon

# 53. Tom Cassell, US

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1

1

3

9th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
Mom decides on
cataract surgery

# 72. Bill Pauly, US

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0

0

3

9th Place Tie

 

hazy moon—
scattered snowflakes twinkle
in a starless sky

# 48. John Thompson, US

0 1 1 3 9th Place Tie

 

tarnished silver ring
a face with hazy moon-eyes
tilt in the night sky

# 03. Barbara Anderson, US

0

0

2

2

10th Place Tie

 

year of the ox
—a hazy moon
on the horizon

# 15. Eric V "El Coyote", US

0

0

2

2

10th Place Tie

 

hazy moon—
the shadow of an old man
in deep emotion

# 20. Eiko Yachimoto, JP

0

0

2

2

10th Place Tie

 

first night together
memories of a hazy moon
sweetly lingers

# 21. Harvey Jenkins, CA

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0

2

2

10th Place Tie

 

walking alone
I sing to the hazy moon
thinking of you

# 44. Deirdre Godwin, CA

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0

2

2

10th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
the young pianist
off a half-note

# 46. Harvey Jenkins, CA

0

1

0

2

10th Place Tie

 

through the mist
a friendly face 
hazy moon 

# 56. John McDonald, UK

0

1

0

2

10th Place Tie

 

glowing lake
above below—
hazy moon

# 57. Kristin Reynolds, US

0

1

0

2

10th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
the glimmer of a distant
lighthouse beacon

# 76. Catherine J. S. Lee, US

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0

2

2

10th Place Tie

 

trying to trace
how the quarrel started

hazy moon

# 80. Catherine J. S. Lee, US

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0

2

2

10th Place Tie

 

A blind old man
telling to his grandsons
about the hazy moon

# 01. Vasile Moldovan, RO

0 0 1 1 11th Place Tie

 

indoors the music
outside a hazy moonshine
blues/jazz ambience 

# 06. Gillena Cox, TT

0

0

1

1

11th Place Tie

 

a broken window
cold rushes through...
hazy moon

# 17. Tanya Dikova, IL

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0

1

1

11th Place Tie

 

hazy moon—
a doe grazes with her fawns
on cemetery flowers

# 23. John Thompson, US

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0

1

1

11th Place Tie

 

snow covered orchard
under a bare stem
the hazy moon

# 30. Tom Cassell, US

0

0

1

1

11th Place Tie

 

much ado about nothing:
a chained dog barking
at the hazy moon

# 31. Vasile Moldovan, RO

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0

1

1

11th Place Tie

 

new year—
whisky breaths
a hazy moon

# 33. John McDonald, UK

0

0

1

1

11th Place Tie

 

the street busy with
tourist for the carnival—
hazy moon

# 35. Gillena Cox, TT

0

0

1

1

11th Place Tie

 

she whispered to me   
all night long—
hazy moon   

# 59. Robin Beshers, US

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0

1

1

11th Place Tie

 

hazy moon—
wolves on the shore
crying

# 63. Eric V "El Coyote", US

0

0

1

1

11th Place Tie

 

hazy moon—
hina-dolls begin
their party

# 66. Eiko Yachimoto, JP

0

0

1

1

11th Place Tie

 

puffy eyes
she counts each breath
under a hazy moon

# 75. Mary Davila, US

0

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1

11th Place Tie

 

her dreams rise
through the open window
hazy moon

# 77. Mary Davila, US

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0

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1

11th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
the smoke drifts
into her dream  

# 79. Mary Davila, US

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1

1

11th Place Tie

 

hazy moon music;
ink blue rhapsody
fairies dance on snow

# 11.

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0

12th Place Tie

  

hazy moon...
a boat swaggering
upon the ocean

# 13.

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0

12th Place Tie

 

The road is rolling
A  hazy moon like a candy
On its uneven tongue

# 16.

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0

12th Place Tie

 

half a hazy moonmirrored in the icy lake
winter is waning

# 18.

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0

12th Place Tie

  

a hazy moon shines
on solstice revelers—
the world turns and tilts 

# 24.

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0

12th Place Tie

  

# hazy moon . . .
I brush the hair
from your eyes

# 25.

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0

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0

12th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
down the small
of her back

# 26.

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0

12th Place Tie

 

Dreary clouds
As dark blankets—
Hazy moon

# 27.

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0

0

0

12th Place Tie

 

a little hazy          
only the moon
guides me home

# 32.

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0

12th Place Tie

 

the world
seems older somehow—     
hazy moon      

# 36.

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0

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0

12th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
mingling with memories
the scent of oranges

# 37. Judith Gorgone, US

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0

12th Place Tie

 

hospice visit
a hazy sun appears
through the dark clouds

# 40.

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0

12th Place Tie

 

Hazy moon is searching
For another religion
Among the poor scrums

# 42.

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0

12th Place Tie

  

the rear-view mirror:
an optometrist seeing
a hazy moon

# 45. Eiko Yachimoto, JP

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0

0

0

12th Place Tie

  

bar patrons file out
under the hazy moon—
shine 

# 49.

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0

0

0

12th Place Tie

 

Hazy moon…
still in my sad soul
yours echo steps

 # 51.

0

0

0

0

12th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
drinking scotch on the rocks
at midnight

# 52.

0

0

0

0

12th Place Tie

 

hazy moon—      
not remembering
the night before

# 55. Barbara A Taylor, AU

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0

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0

12th Place Tie

  

hazy moon—
the pianist tries his hand at
a new tune

# 58.

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0

0

0

12th Place Tie

 

hazy moon—
at the midnight hour
an owl hooting

# 62.

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0

0

0

12th Place Tie

  

Outdoors a hazy moon
As I look out of the window
What an ugly smile 

# 64.

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0

12th Place Tie

 

hazy moon moves
to a corner of the sky
my cat settles in

# 67.

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0

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0

12th Place Tie

 

 

hazy moon—
the scent of a baked sausage
lingers

# 68.

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0

0

12th Place Tie

 

we step outside
inside the old man’s eyes
the hazy moon

# 71.

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0

12th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
through campfire smoke
I catch her eye

# 73.

0

0

0

0

12th Place Tie

 

hazy moon
seen through her
new negligee

# 74.

0

0

0

0

12th Place Tie

 


Hello Haiku Poet,

Below is the ballot for the Sketchbook February 2009 “hazy moon” Kukai vote.

Please NOTE that the votes should be sent to kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org 

CALL FOR Sketchbook February 2009 “hazy moon” Kukai vote:
Voting: Wednesday, February 18, 2009 – Tuesday, February 24, 2009, Midnight.
 

1. All the entries are listed on the ballot by number.
2. Only submitting Kukai Poets are eligible to vote.
3. Email your votes to: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org  When voting, please use the words "crazy moon" Kukai in the subject line of your e-mail.
4. Each poet has SIX (6) points to use for the kukai vote. Voters may distribute the points in increments of 1, 2, or 3. You may not cast more than 3 points for any single poem.
5. Please do not vote for your own poem(s). Any such votes will be disqualified.
6. Please use the following format to submit your votes (listing by numerical order, rather than order of preference, as the sample below): 

To: kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org
Subject: "hazy moon" Kukai Vote

Each voter has 6 points: 

# 03--1 pt.
# 11--2 pts.
# 28--3 pts.

7. All votes will be compiled and the haiku will then be published in the February 28, 2009 Sketchbook with votes received; on the names of the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd, etc. place poets' names will be revealed. Haiku receiving 0 votes will be published without names. If you want your name revealed regardless of the number of votes received please notify the kukaieditor@poetrywriting.org

 The votes will appear as per the following sample:

0 2 7 11 = ____ Place

Which means:

No voter gave 3 points, 2 voters gave 2 points, 7 voters gave 1 point = for a total of 11 points

CALL FOR Sketchbook February 2009 “hrazy moon” Kukai vote:
Voting: Wednesday, February 18, 2009 – Tuesday, February 24, 2009, Midnight.

 

 

 

 

 

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