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Zhanna P. Rader, US
 

 

 

 

Haibun

Along the White Trail

At 4 p.m. we two adventurous grandmothers dressed in jeans and cotton sweaters begin a hike in the Botanical Gardens along the White Trail, not really knowing where it will take us. We walk for an hour through the autumn splendor, gathering brightly colored leaves and following white markings on the tree trunks. The path turns leading us beside a murmuring brook.

Dusk falls rapidly as we proceed along the Oconee River. Somewhere in the bushes, frightened birds flap their wings. A cardinal begins its soft yet piercing distress call, “Tsik-tsik-tsik!” A deer’s sudden rush through thickets startles me. My friend Carla is spared the fright: she has left her hearing aids at home. Her night vision isn’t the best either, and she praises my white sneakers: easy to see and to follow.

The river reflects the sky’s dim light from the cloud-hidden moon.

Canada geese
begin their loud honking

smell of water…

The path veers toward the forest. It is dark under the canopy of trees, and we have been unable to see the white markings, or any markings at all for that matter, for a long while. But there has to be an end soon!

Suddenly we come upon a swamp, tall trunks of dead trees poking the sky with their graphite-like points. A ghostly view! The darkness deepens. I follow the trampled gray-white leaves on our path, holding the hand of my trailing companion, taking small steps, lest we trip over tree roots. The stench of dead animal marks a stretch of our journey. But humor carries us on:

“When did you last hike in the woody swamps at night? Never?”

“Next time, we’ll carry a flashlight and an ax with us, just in case…”

Stories of people
lost in the wilderness

suppressed breathing…

We take careful steps, in single file and connected by a tight handgrip. We tread our way along a gurgling but invisible creek. All at once, it is right before us, and we need to cross. To help out, Carla hands me her watch, which has a fluorescent dial face, and I hold its dim green light close to the water, looking for each protruding rock and touching it with my hand to check its shape. We manage this very well and go on. There has to be an end…

Finally, after three hours of hiking, we reach the brightly-lit center of the Gardens and exit from our route, where the sign says, “Orange Trail.”
Orange Trail!? How did that happen?

Moon peeks out
from behind the clouds

a smiling face.

 

 

 

 

 

 



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