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Renku
 

 

 

 

Backs to the Wind

 

Karina Klesko, US: Sabaki
Eiko Yachimoto, JP: Renku Counsel
Norman Darlington, IE: (Creator of the Triparshva/Mentor)

Betty Kaplan-US
John Daleiden-US

 

SIDE 1-JO 

 

backs to the wind
we gather round a brazier
swapping tales /nd
 
bears and wolves
in the blackest forest /ey
 
all the old habits
hung out on the line
at the convent /kk
 
hidden under the doormat
the forgotten key /bk
 
a sliver of moon
through the evening haze
reveals our path /jd
 
water mirrors its shadow,
the garden's mountain rose
 /Muramori* /nd /ey

 

SIDE 2 - HA

 


blind-folded lady,
us with no voting rights
shedding tears of joy /ey

dumping twenty
headless bodies in a pit /nd
 
this morning
summer butterflies color
my private sky** /jd
 
midnight sun, fantastic light
in fantastic darkness /kk
 
we danced and we danced
"The Anniversary Waltz"
unaltered by time /bk
 
along the wood grain
a shelf of your photographs /ey
 
the whisper
of a heart within
that first leaf's fall /nd
 
fresh red apples
at a roadside stand /jd
 
moon viewing 
from every window 
on the train /kk
 
hero or villain? 
the nitty-grit of jesse james /bk 

 


SIDE 3-KYU

 

burning the throat
a shot of bourbon
punctuates my life /ey

spin the Hanukkah dreidel***
nun-gimel-hay-shin /kk
 
a whale breaches
the unconstrained expansion
of a galaxy /nd
 
she paints a tractor
into a barren landscape /jd
 
wild plum blossoms
call to the bees
to rest upon their petals /bk

heat shimmers
winding through city streets /kk

 

 

Notes
 

* Verse 6:  Muramori:   

mizu ni kaga sou niwa no yamabuki

the water mirrors its shadow
the garden's mountain rose

translated by Norman Darlington and Eiko Yachimoto

**Verse 9: Your Private SkyYour Private Sky is the title of a Buckminster Fuller book and an Exhibition, 1999.

***Verse 18: Dreidel is a game children play during Hanukkah using a four-sided top; the Hebrew letters on the four sides are nun, gimel, hay, and shin which form a Hebrew acronym meaning "A great miracle happened there."

 

 

Renku Information

 

Covey of Noisy Quail:  Sketchbook Vol. 2, No. 3: September 2007
          Vertical Version                Horizontal Version

The Triparshva: an introduction – Norman Darlington & John Carley
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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