Renku Project: November 2008

 

 

Links to Renku Material   The Triparshva: an introduction – Norman Darlington & John Carley Covey of Noisy Quail:  Sketchbook Vol. 2, No. 3: September 2007           Vertical Version                Horizontal Version   Template & verses for November 2008 Renku Project   Poets for Renku Project: November 2008   Norman Darlington Karina Klesko Eiko Yachimoto Betty Kaplan John Daleiden — This is our proposed template. After the fifth verse the rest will be assigned. Thanksl Karina Klesko - Sabaki Eiko Yachimoto -Renku Counsel Norman Darlington - Creator of the Triparshva /Mentor   We are following the far right hand column of the triparshva template beginning with winter.   SIDE 1-JO 1. wi/hokku- degachi -Long Verse 2. wi/wakiku- degachi - Short Verse 3. ns/daisen - degachi -Long Verse 4.ns -degachi -Short Verse 5.sp/ mn -dagachi - Long Verse End of dagachi ..... 6.sp ---- -Short Verse SIDE 2 - HA 7. ns- Long Verse 8. ns- Short Verse 9.su-Long Verse 10. su-lv- Short Verse 11.ns/lv- Long Verse 12 ns/lv- Short Verse 13 au/lv- Long Verse 14 au/- Short Verse 15 au /mn- Long Verse 16. ns - Short Verse SIDE 3-KYU 17.ns- Long Verse 18. wi- Short Verse 19. ns- Long Verse 20. sp-Short Verse 21. sp/ bl- Long Verse 22 sp/ageku - Short Verse

                  

                   Renku Template

			Triparshva A trilateral pattern for renku Norman Darlington
Side 1 - jo
hokku	au	au mn	sp	sp bl	su	wi
wakiku	au	au 5	sp	sp 5	su	wi
daisan	ns	au 5	ns	sp 5	ns	ns
4	ns 1	ns	ns 1	ns	ns 1	ns 1
5	suwi mn	suwi	suwi mn	suwi mn	spwi mn	spsu mn
6	ns 1	ns	ns 1	ns 1	spns 1	spns 1
Side 2 - ha
7	ns	ns	ns	ns	ns	ns
8	ns 2	ns	ns 2	ns 2	ns 3	ns 3
9	wisu 2	ns 2	wisu 2	wisu 2	nssp 3	nssp 3
10	wisu 2 lv	wisu 2 + 1	wisu 2 lv	wisu 2 lv	wisp 3 lv	susp 3 lv
11	ns 2 lv	wisu mn	ns 2 lv	ns 2 lv	ns 3 lv	ns 3 lv
12	ns lv	ns lv	ns lv	ns lv	ns lv	ns lv
13	ns 4 lv	ns 4 lv	ns 4 lv	ns 4 lv	ns 4 lv	ns 4 lv
14	au 4 + 6	au 4 lv	au 4 + 6	au 4 + 6	au 4 + 6	au 4 + 6
15	au 4 mn	au lv	au 4 mn	au 4 mn	au 4 mn	au 4 mn
16	au 6	ns	au 6	au 6	au 6	au 6
Side 3 - kyu
17	ns	ns 2	ns	ns	ns	ns
18	suwi	suwi	suwi	suwi	wi	su
19	ns	ns	ns	ns 2	ns	ns
20	sp	sp	sp	ns	sp	sp
21	sp bl	sp bl	sp bl	sp	sp bl	sp bl
22	sp	sp	sp	sp	sp	sp
Notes	The Triparshva respects the jo-ha-kyu movement typical of the Kasen renku. 1 - the minor moon and its associated season may pull up or spill to this position. 2 - summer or winter may pull up or spill to these positions. 3 - in ha spring, winter or summer may pull up or spill to these positions. 4 - autumn may pull up to these positions. 5 - exceptionally moon or blossom may spill to these positions. 6 - exceptionally moon may pull up or spill to these positions. Not all possible seasonal positions are shown. Differing seasons should be separated by at least one non-season verse. Groups of seasonal verses pull up or spill en bloc. suwi - whichever season appears in jo the other will appear in ha, reverting in kyu. spwi - for a sequence begun in summer jo will contain a pair of spring verses or a single winter verse. Where spring is selected in jo winter will appear in ha. spsu - for a sequence begun in winter jo will contain a pair of spring verses or a single summer verse. Where spring is selected in jo summer will appear in ha. bl - blossom position. mn - moon position. lv - love position (approximate). Love should open with call-for-love and conclude with end-of-love. Love positions pull up or spill en bloc.